From Eddie aka bratpop
From Eddie
I felt bad that JAM #6 was left undone and I wanted to do it, so I did. These are my notes:

1. I took the liberty of editing the dialogue because there were so many spelling and grammar mistakes. My apologies if this was a deeply personal script page. But this is just my version and I wasn't getting paid.

2. I didn't read the script very closely and failed to acknowledge that I was supposed to show "row(s) of horsemen." I suppose two rows would have been easier than two armies, but since I can't draw horses, it's just as well. Considering I didn't know how I was going to draw an army, I think I pulled it off well.

3. I'm lazy and not very skilled, so I drew the men cartoonish and faceless. If you'd like to interpret that as a statement that war is faceless, go right ahead. It works for me.

4. I haven't seen Gladiator and I wanted different sound effects. Please enjoy the gratuitous use of axes for decapitations.

5. I'm sorry that the yellow army looks like an entire Starfleet of bald Datas. I wanted them to have a different uniform design. It was not my intention to slander Starfleet or Data. What do you mean it's just a show?

6. The script says the flagman is fighting off his own men, but I don't know why he'd be doing that. I didn't think he'd be saying "yall" in Brazil either. And I figured one "burn in Hell, bastards" was enough. But now I'm wondering if the yellow guys were supposed to be vampires. Please note the abundance of hats.

8. Obligatory web comic disclaimer/excuse: "The original looks better."